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Nesheemah

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  • Started 7 months ago by fleischmann
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  1. "Breathe" he told the world
    and they obeyed him
    and yet he lost his breath
    He looked everywhere
    He asked his mother
    And then recalled
    that she died
    and her last words
    were
    "I can't breathe."

    Posted 7 months ago #
  2. Q - I wanted the word "were" at the end of that line following a blank space, but didn't know how to post it that way (I tried). If you know how please let me know. (I wanted to write other letters and then white them out, but didn't see how to do it.)

    Posted 7 months ago #

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