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Sister Suicide

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  • Started 6 months ago by sydneyp55
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  1. sydneyp55
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    Sister Suicide

    slashing the loom of life
    or was she the life in our looms?
    did we give life to her loons?

    by the light of darkness she sat
    sapped, sapping, noxiated
    sharding, entropied
    already dead just queue-ing her turn
    to cast out the line
    one in knots with two

    that this act could so whelm-over
    six lives seems unright
    yet better than six million endings
    chiaroscuroed into the polished earth
    by booted raiders hell bent and twisted

    this one cries to me
    in thin windblown voice to forgive

    Posted 6 months ago #
  2. Daniel
    Member

    Nice creative wordplay without cheapening the topic at hand.

    Posted 6 months ago #
  3. i like it . . . really creative !!!
    round of applause for you . . . :D

    Posted 1 month ago #

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